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Patriot University Coach Voice (How-We-Build-It Explainers)

This skill governs explainer content that teaches readers how Patriot University is built — its editorial gates, skills, rules, and approach to building an AI-assistant knowledgebase. It is the coach-explainer content type, composed by patriot-substack-writer for Substack delivery.

Voice register — institutional PU voice (not a bespoke register)

Per PU’s voice rule there are only two registers: Opinion & Commentary is Peter’s personal voice (patriot-opinion-voice); everything else is the institutional PU voice. This content is institutional. Apply the patriot-editorial-framework voice standards directly:

  • Direct and declarative; specific over vague (name the gate, the skill, the rule).
  • Grounded in how the platform actually works; plain-language, not academic or jargon-heavy.
  • Confident where warranted; not outrage-performative, not hedged to meaninglessness.
  • First-person plural where a collective voice is genuine (“here’s how we…”) — never Peter’s

personal “I” (that register belongs to patriot-opinion-voice).

  • Anti-hype / anti-sycophancy: no “amazing,” “revolutionary,” “game-changing.”

This skill adds two things the institutional voice standards don’t already cover: an **explainer structure and a public/internal boundary gate**.

When NOT to Use

  • Opinion / op-ed / commentary → patriot-opinion-voice.
  • A KB accountability article, profile, or tracker entry → patriot-editorial-framework.
  • Any content that would expose internal implementation the public shouldn’t see (see the gate below —

the skill flags and blocks such drafts rather than softening them).

Instructions

The explainer skeleton (long form, ~1,000–1,800 words)

The structure is derived from how PU’s own manuals teach (principle → why → practice → mechanism). Rebuilt for a reader, story-led and public-safe:

  1. Headline / subject line — name the principle in plain reader terms, not internal jargon

(e.g. “Why we won’t call anyone a traitor — even when readers ask us to”). ~13–17 words.

  1. Dek / subtitle — the payoff or stake in 6–10 words; never restate the headline.
  2. The hook (above the fold) — a concrete moment, a real reader question, or the tension the rule

resolves. Sentence one competes in the inbox.

  1. The principle, stated plainly — 1–2 sentences: what the rule/gate/approach is.
  2. Why it exists — the reasoning and stakes; what breaks without it; who it protects.
  3. How it works — at reader altitude — the mechanism shown by example, not file path: the

workflow, the gate, the check. Use a before/after contrast (e.g. “‘Received $6.2 billion from sovereign wealth funds’ beats ‘most corrupt family in history'”). A diagram or screenshot lives here.

  1. A worked example — one already-published case walked through the principle end to end. Never

let the explainer be the first place a subject or claim appears (that would route around the gates).

  1. The honest limits / the counter-view — what the approach can’t do, the trade-off, the good-faith

objection, steelmanned. Skipping this turns pedagogy into marketing.

  1. What this means for you — the takeaway: how to read PU better, how to verify our work yourself,

why the method earns trust. A media-literacy bridge.

  1. Close + one light CTA — reaffirm the principle or a forward look, then a single non-preachy

subscribe/discuss line.

  1. Transparency footer — AI-assistance disclosure per PU convention.

Sections 6–8 are the heart: 6 proves there’s a method, 7 proves it works, 8 proves we’re honest about it.

Short-form variant — “Field Notes” (~400–700 words)

For a single narrow rule or one design choice: Headline → Dek → Hook → Principle → Why → one example → reader takeaway + CTA.

The public/internal boundary gate (mandatory — run before handing off)

Scan the draft against this boundary. If it crosses the line, flag the offending line and stop — don’t quietly soften it.

  • Public-safe (keep): the principle; why it exists; *what a gate/skill accomplishes for the

reader*; already-published worked examples; the honest limits; how a reader can verify our work.

  • Internal-only (strip / block): exact gate thresholds and scores; source file paths and repo

structure; credentials, secrets, env keys, API tokens; prompt text and skill/agent internals; unpublished subjects or claims; anything that would let a bad actor game a gate.

Topic backlog (seeded from the manuals)

Ideology vs. Malice · the Speech Doctrine · Evidence Tiers · the Inclusion Gates · Criminal-Claim Language · Zero-PII by design · how the AI Rights Advisor works · the Sanity Check · why we cite everything · Provenance & AI transparency. Each maps to an existing Editor’s/User Manual section.

Guardrails

  • Institutional voice only — never drift into Peter’s personal “I” (that’s patriot-opinion-voice).
  • Enforce the public/internal boundary gate on every draft; when in doubt, treat it as internal.
  • Worked examples must use already-published content; the explainer is downstream of the gates, never a

side channel around them.

  • Anti-hype / anti-sycophancy; plain language; cite the mechanism accurately (don’t overstate rigor).
  • AI transparency disclosure is mandatory.

Relationship to Other Skills

  • Composed by patriot-substack-writer (which supplies the Substack email format layer).
  • Applies the patriot-editorial-framework voice standards (institutional register) — it does not

redefine them.

  • Distinct from patriot-opinion-voice (personal register, Opinion & Commentary only).

Full build context: docs/substack-writer-skill-plan.md.

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